I am the Steam enemy (letra de musica)

[Steam Enemy]

Primeiro preciso esclarecer que não criei essa letra do zero. Eu não sou um escritor e nem compositor eu sou um editor.
Eu peguei a letra de uma outra musica e criei uma nova em cima dela.
Caso queiram ver a letra da musica original está aqui:

Spoiler: Letra original

Ohhh, oohhhoohhhh, Oohhhh

Hey all (hey all)
Welcome to the greatest storm
I know (I know)
You have waited much too long
And I (and I)
I will be your shining star
I'm here (I'm here)
Here to conquer fear and fall...

Like a sword, I'm brought
Into the heat of day
Like a knight, I fight
Until the fight is won
In the reign, I'll save
Each and every
Each and every
Each and everyone
'Till this war is won
And I'm meant to rule
Like a sword
Slashing through to every inch of the power
The power in you

As I sit
As I stand
By the pain will I command
My kingdom

I'm a knight of the wind

Ohhh, oohhhoohhhh, Oohhhh

Hey all (hey all)
Welcome to the end is near
I know (I know)
I will bring you pain and fear!

On the ground, to the sky!
Face them you and I
In a flash, i'm gone
Holding your crown high

In the rage, I'll save
Each and every
Each and every
Each and everyone
'Till this war is won
And I'm meant to rule
By the sword
Slashing through to every inch of the power
The power in you


As I sit
As I stand
By the pain will I command
My kingdom

I'm a knight of the wind
The knight of the wind
I'm the knight of the wind
(My castle is a massive force!
A stronghold of power!
My armor stays unbreakable!
Battle every hour!)

[solo]

Ohhh, oohhhoohhhh, Oohhhh

Like a sword, I'm wrought
Into the heat of day
Like a knight, I'll fight
Until the fight is won
In the reign, I'll save
Each and every
Each and every
Each and everyone
'Till this war is won
And I'm meant to rule
like a sword
Slashing through to every inch of the power
The power in you

As I sit
As I stand
By the table I command
My kingdom

I'm a knight of the wind
The knight of the wind

Essa é a letra da minha musica chamada I Am The Steam Enemy:

Ohhh, oohhhoohhhh, Oohhhh

Hey you (hey you)
Welcome to the endless war
I know (I know)
This will never end
But I (but I)
I will fight in the right side
I'm here (I'm here)
Here to free you from this curse...

Like a hero, I came
To save the day
With my knife, I fight
Until this war is won
As a pirate, I'll crack
Each and every
Each and every
Each and every game
'Till I won this war
And I'm meant to free
Everyone
Slashing through to every inch of this curse
The curse of Steam

For you
Like a real man
I promise to fight against
The Steam

I am the Steam enemy

Ohhh, oohhhoohhhh, Oohhhh

Hey you (hey you)
Welcome to your end
I will (I will)
Bring you pain and fear!

In the life, and death!
You and I will fight
In a flash, I will
Destroy you

In the rage, I'll crack
Each and every
Each and every
Each and every games
'Till I won this war
And I'm meant to free
Everyone
Slashing through to every inch of this curse
The curse of Steam

For you
Like a real man
I promise to fight against
The Steam

I am the Steam enemy
Steam enemy
I'm Steam enemy
(My eyes has a massive force!
A darkness blood power!
My body is invincible!
Ready to battle every hour!)

[solo]

Ohhh, oohhhoohhhh, Oohhhh

Like a hero, I came
To save the day
With my knife, I fight
Until this war is won
As a pirate, I'll crack
Each and every
Each and every
Each and every game
'Till I won this war
And I'm meant to free
Everyone
Slashing through to every inch of this curse
The curse of Steam

For you
Like a real man
I promise to fight against
The Steam

I am the Steam enemy
The Steam enemy


O que acharam?

 

[NumPaD]

-Ahoy
Muito promissor, o inglês está bom também. Não sou entendido, mas acho que tu podia largar de fazer jogos e focar em virar um músico/artista.

Unica coisa "ruim" é que tem um [solo] no meio da letra. E eu fiquei curioso para ouvir. Seria um solo de voz ou de algum instrumento, tipo guitarra?